Inteha-e-ishq: Uske Rang mein...
Apni mohabbat ko is tarah nibhati hoon main,
Ki Vo din ko raat kahe, to bhi Maan jaati hoon main,
Vo meri soch me is kadar samaya hai,
Ki khud ko hi bhool jaati hoon main...
Kehte hai pyaar me ek dusre ko badla ni jata...
Par inteha-e-ishq to dekho mera,
uske rang me hi dhal jaati hoon main...
Vo khuda ki Inayat, falaq hai mera,
Jiske tasavvur bhar se sukoon pati hu main...
Aapko is poem ki kounsi line sabse jyada relatable lgi? Comment kar ke zaroor btaiye...
Meri dusri poem "meri pehchaan kisi kandhe ki mohtaaj nahin " padhne ke liye yha click karein:
https://ehsaasbyswati.blogspot.com/2026/03/meri-pehchan-kisi-kandhe-ki-mohtaaj.html?m=1
Kuch naye ehsaas likhne ki koshish mein...
Aapki Swati...

All the poem is so beautiful n relatable for all those people who ever do love, but the second para..(vo meri soch me is kadar samaya hai) in this line i really experienced it) you doing really so well.
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Thank you so much The sweet one! I'm so glad ki aapko ye poem relatable lagi. Specially wo wali line—'vo meri soch me is kadar samaya hai'—wo mere dil ke bhi bahut kareeb hai. It feels amazing when readers connect with the emotions behind the words. Keep reading and supporting 'Ehsaas by Swati'. Means a lot! 🙏
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